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Visual art is a product where elements are arranged in a way that appeals to the senses or emotions, explored through a branch of philosophy known as aesthetics. Aesthetic quality is dependent on general human experience but one's culture is also a pivotal influence on one's perspective of art.

Visual art is a product where elements are arranged in a way that appeals to the senses or emotions, explored through a branch of philosophy known as aesthetics. Aesthetic quality is dependent on general human experience,culture and society especially influences one's perception of art.

Let's keep working at fine tuning the second part of your statement here. As it stands, it is a run-on sentence. How can you make it more precise?